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Writing exercise
🕑 Added 2020-08-06 18:04:42 +0000 UTCRead through some New Teen Titans and Uncanny X-Men--which I think we can agree are a high point of modern cape shit--with an eye for what plot advancement happens on each and every page. Obviously, the trick is also investing this stuff with characterization--and some of this stuff will spill over into a few panels on the next page, et al--but it seems to me like a good outlining trick is one or two sentences of plot progression per page, with allowances for multiple pages in the case of visually spectacular action scenes.
1-2: Sunfire leaves the team
3-4: Banshee agrees to stay, but the old X-Men leave.
5: Cyclops decides to stay, Jean leaves him.
6-7: Cyclops begins training the X-Men.
8: Thunderbird has a training accident and flips out.
9: Establish NORAD setting.
10-11: NORAD is invaded by Ani-Men, working for Count Nefaria.
12: Nefaria establishes his bona fides, recalls backstory.
13: Cyclops broods; the team is made aware of Nefaria.
14: Nefaria threatens, the X-Men are dispatched, an injured Thunderbird refuses to stay behind.
15: The team is confronted by the Air Force, who then further brief them on Nefaria.
16: Nefaria attacks the approaching X-Men.
17: The X-Men evade missiles, but finally are hit.
18: They get away in an escape pod, which Nefaria further destroys, leaving them falling unprotected from a great height.
1: Splash page picking up from cliffhanger.
2: Further recap, the team struggles to find a way to land safely.
3: Colossus lands safely via his mutation.
4: Cyclops is saved by Banshee.
5: Scott has Nightcrawler teleport into the base, but he’s attacked.
6: Nightcrawler duels and overcomes his attacker.
7: Nightcrawler lets in the others, but his prisoner escapes.
8-9: The X-Men are attacked by and overcome low-level defenses.
10: The Ani-Men attack the X-Men.
11: Wolverine is overcome, but Colossus saves him.
12: Cyclops and Nightcrawler help each other defeat their foes.
13: The last of the Ani-Men are beaten.
14: The team leaves an unconscious Thunderbird and Banshee, but are still too late to stop a doomsday program. Nefaria flees in a Harrier jet.
15: The recovered Thunderbird and Banshee attempt to catch Nefaria. Thunderbird recklessly boards his plane.
16: Professor X informs Cyclops that the battle with the Ani-Men damaged the program enough to render it inoperable. Thunderbird attacks the plane despite being cautioned against it.
17: Thunderbird’s attack causes the Harrier to explode.
18: Epilogue: The X-Men mourn Thunderbird.
