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🕑 Added 2021-01-16 22:59:59 +0000 UTC

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I like your stories a lot, but you need to be consistent with the characterization. Why is Dick acting like a virgin and Kara, who was a virgin until the last hour, acting like she is a pro with many years of experience? And he needed to "rest" after a blowjob?! Come on! This was the guy who fucked Komand'r, Kory and Donna at the same time for what it seemed like for hours. Why is acting so insecure with her when with others he is far from insecure? All that because she is a virgin? Mistif was a virgin and he wasn't like that with her. Is it because she a relative of Superman? Nah, this is not convicing. And Kara was a virgin until a while ago and now she desperate for anal? It is not that this is impossible, but she is acting too much like a nympho for a guy who was bumbling like an idiot only a few minutes ago. Again, I love your stories, but the whole Kara and Dick thing was a bit of a turn off because of the way you've written him .

Shendude

Huh, so even if this isn't strictly in-continuity as MtS, it seems Kara has a pretty similar personality in both of 'em.


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