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🕑 Added 2020-03-29 23:02:12 +0000 UTCHello Lewd Crew!
This month didn't go as expected, but that can be said to this entire year sofar. I know the situation out there doesn't look so good, but I hope all of you stays safe during these troubling times, and thank you for sticking with me through this.
As for the page, I had fun with it, mostly with Nick. I had a little dillema that took up some days in the design of the page. In the original script I would've had Judy have a quick thought about it that Nick never actually called her his girlfriend before infront of others, mostly because they are still mostly hiding their relationship.
But unlike written form, in comic, I feel like I have to follow the movie's way and method of narration which is 99% of the time entirely visual. Although Judy is the protagonist we are never in her head, we don't hear her thoughts, which is also partially why people see both her and Nick as the protagonist, because the audience doesn't get much more into Judy's head than Nick's. We watch their adventure from an outsider's point of view, and while in a written form some sort of narration is unavoidable, if the movie doesn't have a narrator, details like "this was the first time Nick called Judy his girlfriend" can be lost. I plan to compensate for that at a later point of the comic, because I think its a really cute detail. But let me know what you think! Do you like zootopia fanfictions where you hear Judy's or Nick's thoughts? Does it make them more real to you, or does it makes it harder to indentify with their situations because their thoughts and inner reactions might differ from yours? Let me know what you think! See you all soon!
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InTheLionsDen
The page looks lovely.
ReaderNo31142
Great job :3
