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MysticStripSearch - Page 17 - WIP
🕑 Added 2019-07-14 22:38:11 +0000 UTCHello everyone! Sorry for the delay with this page, I was kinda thinking a lot with the perpective. The idea I had for the main panel of this page, the deepthroating part ended up being too much like the previous page. But I wanted to have a good shot and Judy's throat bulding with Nick's manliness, and his legs would've been in the way of that from any other point of view that I could come up with.
What do you guys think, should I redesign the page, try to come up with a some different perspectives or do you like it the way it is? Let me know in the comments below
Also on the first panel, I had the idea of semi-transparent member of Nick, so we see into her mouth, but I haven't do that before, and was afraid that would look weird. But wat do you guys think, should I go for it regardless, and try it out whenever it works?
Comments
RobCivecat
Heya Brad! Don't mistake Nick standing on his toes to be his legs being long. I maybe need to make the transition better, but I do my best to keep to Nick's original anatomy, and I d think I did well here and the previous page. The 3 parts of the leg, thighs, shin and foot are all short compared to his body length, just like his original anatomy.
m42
As for the testicle thing you two mentioned above, I agree they are inconsistent but I see that as a flaw with the last page rather than this one - these look more reasonable in terms of anatomy and also are more attractive imo.
m42
Nicks bootyhole should be visible though given the angle and how much he's spreading his legs
JKnight97
You did something like that in Foxy Teaser where you showed Nick's member fully inside (knot and all) in her womb as they were on the couch. If done properly, you should be able to show how well Judy can deep throat her vulpine lover.
Brad
The only thing that really bothers me is how long you are making Nicks legs lately. You are making him too humanoid. Nick has short legs in the movie. To those reading this; Am I the only one bothered by this? Be honest. As usual though everything else is great but I do have to agree with InTheLionsDen about the testicle thing.
m42
Bottom is hot, I imagine top will be fine once you have effects/transparency in there
InTheLionsDen
I am not sure what to suggest for the top panel but the bottom seems fine to me. Since this is a continuation in the same position I think it is fine since there are changes that show the progression of action from the previous page (Judy taking Nick deeper, cupping his testicles and Nick's expression). The only thing that seems to be a bit off to me is how far his testicles are out from his body compared to the previous page.
Charles115
You should have her swallow the whole bulge that would be hot
Ztpia
Never can have to much of awesomeness!!!, but if you want to experiment go for it!
MichaelKhriss2019
you don't have to change it looks good.
RobCivecat
Nono, I'm asking whenever I should be changing the perspective of the viewer not the pose of Nick and Judy. This scene is about a deepthroat by Judy, but I feel like this panel looks too much like the previous page
MichaelKhriss2019
so you change it into a doggy style or cowgirl style
