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Chapter 136 - Planning

🕑 Added 2024-09-17 20:11:33 +0000 UTC

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Artman

I’d have a few chapters while traveling to give a feel for the New Earth, beyond that the stopping points for resupply for the rest. My two cents.

Thomas Issa

Also we need to know Gabriel’s profession, maybe Chris could get his brother skills for enchanting and making runes, enchanting using ice magic together We also need to learn his mom’s profession

Thomas Issa

Also people are going to be met on the trip and join the caravan, crafters are going to want to be able to work and progress while travelling, and resources are going to be gathered as beasts are killed That plus John and Austin’s professions make me think that the family is going to set up trade routes and a trading caravan Plus having the world’s largest spatial storage after the hill is deposited

Thomas Issa

What about using mana constructs or summons to pull vehicles? Or using runes to build hauling trucks and such?

Baconwargod

I think you keep things pretty dense as is your pace so far has been great

Athena Alexandria

I will say I didn't think the Tutorial arc dragged at all, that may just be my preference though. I always prefer slower paced writing, as long as it's not just a repetition of the same information, which you have been very good at not doing too badly.

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter 😊 I wonder if Chris can haul 2-3 wagons alone... With his strength stat at over 300 he should be able to do that easily... Also cutting wood... I think he could easily just rip the tree out of the ground and bring it over to whoever needs the wood

PWeygandt

I really appreciate the transparency about the Pacing. Obviously, as a reader, you want each chapter to be filled with new awesome stuff but that isn't realistic. Personally, i am excited for the Zalenski Family Factions journey north and want to see all of the stuff they encounter along the way. Having a couple "mini arcs", that explore various relationships and problems, just seems really fun


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