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Chapter 169 - Time

🕑 Added 2024-10-31 20:23:09 +0000 UTC

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Man_of_culture

I hope there will be something like a ranking board in the system so we can see how many people are stronger or weaker than the MC.

Demonlord

Thanks for the nice chapter 😊 Your concerns are reasonable but in my opinion it was good enough to keep me here and waiting for more action chappys. The fight against the wolfs was awesome and even all the world building chapters were good 😊

Dave Kemp

Not gonna lie, definately a slog to get north but I think that was more the chapter released daily. I think it will read better as a big story. Can't wait to see them start meeting other people in the world.

PWeygandt

Personally, I agree with your choice to write the travel portion with the possibility of editing it down later. Even if some parts felt slow at times, I think it was important. My only hope is that we learn more details about people in the future (class names, Bloodlines, etc.) Looking forward to seeing his family in combat more and seeing other characters fleshed out!

Buck

TFTC!


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