Evil Inc After Dark #14, Page 12
🕑 Added 2016-12-30 16:30:22 +0000 UTC One of the most challenging aspects of NSFW comics is the sound effects. Reviewing my early work, I noticed that the lack of onomatopoeia held some of the smutty scenes back from their full potential.But... it's hard to stay fresh! Take the skin-on-skin sound effect. There's WHUP and variations of SMACK and POP, but then the list falls off precipitously. I've tried to broaded the range of wet/sliding sound effects by adding SWIPP to the slippery SQUITCH. (But I'm still not sure how I feel about it.) Most problematic among these is the ejaculation — which is silent (aside from vocalizations). I've taken to using a description of the action — SPURT — to give the scene an extra charge.
But, I may have had a rare moment of ingenuity in today's debut sound effect. I wanted our tentacled friend to lovingly pay the space wench's* round, firm breasts. And it needed some audio erotica. But what?!
THUB
The exact sound you get by firmly smacking a ripe watermelon.
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* I've chosen a name based on your suggestions, but I'm not revealing it yet.
Comments
Perry F. Bruns
Have you examined the ingenious verbal sound effects of one Don Martin?
SuperDezzy
For erm.. volumatic climaxes Ive used GUSH! And various erupt-y and tsunami-ish SFX a lifetime of Marvel Comics FX can be pressed into service. And remember for wet slickery drippy SFX, H.P. Lovecraft is a virtual thesaurus of sound phrasing! I hope this Girl sticks around in future stories. I like her a bunch!