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Free eComic — The Evil Inc Sourcebook

🕑 Added 2016-11-01 12:29:51 +0000 UTC
Free eComic — The Evil Inc Sourcebook

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Brad Guigar

I have updated this book. If you downloaded it through DriveThruComics, you will receive a notice on getting the revised version. If you downloaded it here, simply click the blue link and download the new version!

Brad Guigar

Thank you! I will get working on those!

Alpha Minor

pdf page 2: in the last sentence "which" should be "whom" - page 3: "Laser" shouldn't be capitalized, lose "the" in front of "Fairmount City," The last sentence in the last paragraph begins with "He" while the other sentences use no subject... would be better to start with "Raised." - page 4: in CH's Origin "bestowed" is a verb with no object... "bestowed powers," "who Titanic Man has" should be "whom Titanic Man had," "Soon she delivered a baby" should be a sentence with a period. Replace the following "a child who" with "The child." - page 6: W's history... "friend" singular, - page 8: you have the dog being 3 inches tall. - page 10: "Desi is a daughter os." - Page 11: You don't describe him being rebuked, so strike "Thusly" from the history, "be proved" might be less awkward as "prove." page 13: might want to force "evil-inc.com" onto one line. I'll let someone else check spelling. Not my strong suit. :)

Brad Guigar

If you have some suggestions, please feel free to pass them along!

Alpha Minor

Love it! Is there a chance to correct some of the spelling/grammar before this goes public, or maybe replace the original .pdf?


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