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Libby & Holly Ch3:P7-8
🕑 Added 2023-10-17 23:49:46 +0000 UTCHappy Tuesday everyone! I hope you're all having a good week so far! 🖤
Art Talk:
Uh oh there's a lot of text you know what that means it's boring time! I have some really un-horny thoughts about panel layout below.
I'm often on the fence about x-ray shots in erotic comics. Sometimes they're really wonderfully visceral and impactful and other times they're kinda clinical and a turn off for me. It always comes down to execution.
This Holly on page 8 would be a real obvious opportunity to use x-ray, however like to make a personal challenge for myself to think of ways to show that Holly really just took it all in, and this panel by itself felt like it lacked impact.
I was sad to cover up all of Holly's squiggly line-hair (I am having fun with that) but I found that adding a panel kinda connected the motion of the two actions in a satisfying way.
The sort of "invisible lines" that connect the girldick between the two panels imply a line of motion that takes place in the time between two panels and make it feel more like Holly's coming to a stop rather than just being static.
This isn't to say that I think X-ray panels are bad or that I'll never use them (I probably will) but I like how having a small creative rule forces me to find new solutions to these challenges.
Don't ask me to draw Libby's girldick on model because I simply don't know how to do it. 😅 It is always too big and will be just as too big as each panel requires. 😌
🖤Wint
Comments
Winton Kidd
😂 sometimes my pragmatist art brain takes over and I kinda lose sight of what I'm actually doing
Jacqueline Saunders
very odd to hear someone talking in such a practical way about girldick, haha
Winton Kidd
❤️ I'm glad to hear it, thank you for reading Minti! 🤓
mel
I love reading the „boring, technical“ things, it’s always interesting what goes on in the artist mind
Winton Kidd
Too true! Just more speed lines in a way!
Fenrysk
i love that the lines on Holly's shirt also add to that effect as well
Winton Kidd
Thank you Wufffffff!!!❤️❤️❤️❤️🥺
Wuff_Boman
They're so good together! Libby profile in the last panel, I'm in love <3
