Libby&HollyCh3:Roughs18-20
🕑 Added 2024-04-24 00:57:37 +0000 UTCThis is a lot more intense than I really thought it would end up π₯΅ but when I started this chapter I thought "I'm going to make it more high stakes this time around" and I guess that's the direction I'm going.
Maybe it's a product of the way I make comics slowly over a long period of time but I'm always kinda surprised by how much I shift things around even at the last moment. I thought I knew how this chapter would end but I'm pretty sure I just changed it π
Happy Tuesday, everyone!
π€Winton
Comments
Winton Kidd
This is really funny and weird because I totally listened to the Jurassic Park audiobook in the past couple of months and maybe it's informing how I approach suspense ππππ
Zack
In terms of dramatic tension, this scene is starting to recall the bit in Jurassic Park with the raptors stalking the kids through the kitchen... which I wasn't really expecting in a comic about masturbating at the library, but I'm certainly not complaining!
Winton Kidd
Glad to hear this Liam! β€οΈ I think I am satisfied with the roughs once the energy is there and then I just try not to lose it as I clean up with the pages π
Winton Kidd
π±πgod I hope not!
Liam Harvey
Enjoy seeing the process from roughs to finals, feels like theres a lot of energy and expressiveness in the rough stage stuff. (The top right panel on the third page here looks really great and made me laugh)
Aristotle Fellatrix
π΅Someone's gonna be in trouble π΅