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Evil Inc full page, week of Sept. 17, 2024
🕑 Added 2024-09-16 22:15:01 +0000 UTCHere's your early access to the full-page version of this week's Evil Inc comics. You can read the entire chapter in process here! You can also use the "Chapter 17 — Boss Battle" link at the bottom of this post! Also, a quick reminder: By the end of the month, everyone at an NSFW level will get this 132-page Halloween eComic free!
Transcript
Panel 1
Narration: "But wait… what happened to the Fairmount Branch after Dr. Whoosh's announcement?"
Desi runs towards Giant Tess' office. A sign reads "Super Human Resources."
Ginat Tess (from inside the office): "I was afraid of this."
Panel 2
Giant Tess listens to her fellow villains gathered in her office.
Miss Match: "Can he do that? — Fire the entire branch?!"
Giant Tess: "He can. But it will take a few days to process the paperwork."
Count Spurlock: "Then we know what we must do."
Panel 3
Tempest: "You can try… but his reflexes are still super fast… And his metabolism processes poisons too quickly for them to work."
Panel 4
The villains are shocked by Tempest's tacit admission that she has tried several times to kill her boss, Dr. Whoosh.
Giant Tess: "I meant… We need to come up with a plan to save the branch."
Panel 5
Giant Tess continues: "But I like the way you think."
Panel 6
The Evil Inc supervillains gather in Giant Tess' office.
Giant Tess: "We must prove to Dr. Whoosh that this branch is too important to close."
Lightning Lady: "Let's pair off and see who can come up with the best scheme."
Iron Dragon: "Yeah! We'll meet here in an hour to determine the best one."
Count Spurlock: "It's exhilarating to see this branch come together to fight a common foe!"
Miss Match: "I'll see if Muskiday has anything in his lab."
Panel 7
The scene shifts to show Iron Dragon sidling up to Desdemonda, circling his arms around her waist. Desi eyes him suspiciously.
Iron Dragon: "You heard what Spurlock said: we need to come together. After that, we can work on a scheme to save the office."
Panel 8
Desi, reaching for Catnip: "No thanks. I'm working with Catnip!"
Catnip (surprised): "Huh?!"
Panel 9
Iron Dragon stands between two women, looking nervous. Desi is glaring at him.
Desdemona: "Why don't you team up with your new friend? After that, you can work on a scheme to save our relationship."
Comments
Brad Guigar
I'm always tweaking characters, trying to find the perfect iteration. I'm getting closet with Giant Tess!
coolraul07
@Brad, Digging your slightly updated version of GianTess. Deliberate, or natural/ subconscious evolution?
Taylan
Why is Desi angry at ID? He was the one getting hit on and didn't go along with it! Feels like a weak conflict.
