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Unabridged Ep. 1 - A Very (Un)Impressive Pilot | Super-Early Access

🕑 Added 2019-07-23 00:03:27 +0000 UTC
Unabridged Ep. 1 - A Very (Un)Impressive Pilot | Super-Early Access

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I enjoyed this, particularly the chemistry between Kirran and Grant. They did come across as a bit too childish to really have anywhere to go in terms of character development, but their initial back and forth was hilarious. I think you would be able to have deeper, more interesting characters if you wrote them as being a little more mature. I agree with the sentiment that Zito's character seems like a challenge to write for. Antisocial psycho is funny for a punchline, but not easy to incorporate into a documentary style comedy. As a general impression I felt that the characterization of everyone could be dialed back, several characters including Lanni and Zito felt a little cartoonish. The camera work was excellent! The episode was polished and the pacing was good. Overall I think this will be enjoyable to watch and I'm glad you all are branching out to try new creative avenues!

Julio Puerta

Hahaha I REALLY loved this episode.!

Julio Puerta

Hahaha I REALLY loved this episode.!

Manuel Mireles

I love this.

James Pinckert

Amazing... absolutely amazing

Meek

Kirran's Helloween shirt is rad, good stuff!

Love this! Can’t wait for more

Albert

That... Was hilarious.

Thomas Hendrikx

Can't wait for 2020

Devin Jones

Yes, I would say I liked this.

GeoEmperor

I love seeing you guys make original content like this! The best thing is seeing all of you guys have fun and being in funny improve-like skits. This was hilarious and it looked like you all had a lot of fun making it, so I’d say you did a great job!

RoqNation

Really good


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