Series update on Ero Witch and Micchi

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NOOOOO - And just as coming back to catch up! - Been offline a bit for work etc, and havent had time etc to comment, suggestions + thoughts, missing words & spelling. Also sorry format etc as quick type phone, patreon not gd comment type limits etc # Last chap 113 up to, plus biggest leave impression [this prob post and expand li there, bttr so on] - Ero was 3sum El, Mira & God => DEF stuff say on that, like too short! Just Cut off like that & big moment = plus good & need more lol. Thou def when read mix feelings lil off on Mira & Gobbie etc (at time- months back 2); phrasing? Mira explaintion/talk Ellori below her b4 suck bit; more show love El & think good idea add having her rub cheek with looking in her eyes etc b4 the 2 give Gob heaven lol. Def felt need lil bit more Mira "loves" Ellori, obviously thou, more &/or def not same thing Gobbie (thou def implied this - just you know, M x E one true couple type stuff first impression time, thou like; ) As put below - WAY make Ellori not get off in Train bit!! Makes no sense & disconnect MxE in moment & build up etc NO WAY Mira couldnt get Ell off, plus just weird not after EXP of Mira, Ellori going already with b4hand action & feelings, also prev shown story sessions stuff Ell not having ‘this’ etc, whilst strap on. Also should explained that Mira got Sensations as if she was Futa there DEFINITELY. Seem obvious & why feeling so good, plus good extra material scene. Pos Ellori too, like how she controls shape & actions of strap on - again how not get off!! (thou Mira def with Futa stuff should have, if not sense El add too). Also Mira bttr said (add to) to "temp" forget Ellori in moment, thou that hard imagine too, than just "forget". Also Ellori Futa gift was def describe as (way) Better than Gob's ;P PLUS funny pun & explanation that part lead Mira let Gob sex at talk Mira being like other Witches (helps bit btter 2); something like - Ellori futa cock "opening up" Mira a little bit more than just one way ;P - LOL (thou tiny obviously - Mira tot way more pro girls :P) "Darling" at end better “one time thing” for then!! Wish said it was more mischivous voice, face etc imply this idea too - As Mira has only ONE "Darling" ;P – THEN to just cut scene at punch line!! WTF! lol # With prev chap also showing 3 in bed, originally wanted that extended (still be nice alittle), but cool point add more to set up later 3sum - that thou Mira didnt want & allow "sex", ie penertration nor kiss, from Gobbie, she "forced, ordered etc" & "graciously allowed" (lol) the very 'receptive' Goblin during session to eat her out & play + pos suck tits during sessions ;P haha => certainly alroeady showed no problem with him there, touching his part & helping lol, plus him in contact with her. GOT to go!! Will catch up soon on rest Ellori, still not start Japan country Mchi yet. Havent read NTR; very hard subject matter, and from peek I saw bit were girls were DEF about have Lesbian sex but was lit Cock Blocked by Delivery man!!! I hop like in Ellori, there's still alot, or atleast sum, girl x girl stuff. Any hope on providing patreon more Succubi *puppy dog eyes* you released dor free a few (2?) more chaps on ScribHub after abrupt cut off (4 way chap too short!! Plus bad imply no more 4 ways :( ) - And it was series that first got me onto you & loved alot. HOPE all is well & best wishes