hatton_slayden
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demon quest with dialouge now
🕑 Added 2019-05-18 22:59:44 +0000 UTChttps://www.dropbox.com/sh/91kedo9yhzqxdvi/AACwJ5GKdmC9f_EjCC_q4tPia?dl=0
prepare for the cringe!! but seriously i hope the dialogue does not suck
now i need to get all the pages refined enough for coloring
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Hatton Slayden
right oh. once i get the line work done i will make those corrections. and i am glad you don't find my dialogue "cringy"
Simone Spinozzi
sent the above by mistake incomplete... soooo yeah... the complete is above. 😅👍
Simone Spinozzi
*he's got a fucking business to get donw* ... *coguh* sooo let's see... page 5: • brave<i><b>d</b></i> many a challenge • grant <strike><b><i>e</i></b></strike>me page 7: perfect answer... also, get "top 10", specifically the porter businass chapter, that chessman horse has a perfect soliloquy. 😉👍 page 11: it reads "better come, my herald" it should read something along the lines of "this is better... come my herald" buuut it might also be that you wanted the double entendre... page 13: t<b><i>ha</i></b>t part page 14: ... .... 🤣🤣🤣🤣👍❤ page 17: here's him doing an A-10 aeromorph impression.... you know... <i>*brrrrrrt!*</i> 🤣👍 page 26: ... .... 🤣🤣🤣🤣👍❤
