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The Show Must go on!

🕑 Added 2019-07-06 00:01:57 +0000 UTC

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Hatton Slayden

ok so i need to fix it for cyborg poster, cabaret poster, magic hands and rabbit out of a hat

Simone Spinozzi

Please note that when i say "the cybernetics is inconsistent" i'm not talking about the first 4 pages of chapter 4 where she slowly gets transformed due to the war, i'm talking about chapter 4 page 5 onwards 😆👍💖

Simone Spinozzi

just finished reviewing every picture. I think - chapter 4 (War Hero) can almost be considered completed - as usual her visible thigh cybernetics is highly inconsistent, it jumps from side to side and sometimes it is missing. I'm honestly thinking to make that something she can remove and move around, something of a "safety breaker" for her shields or something that's attached magnetically so it would make sense that it's never in the same place and sometimes it's missing. - ....change the tacks to either something magnetic or plain old tape. You just had her tack newspaper cuttings on a MIRROR. 🤣😆🤣😆👍💖 - change what i said above about the "Xlargos War Victims" being "Xlargos Refugees". Other than that... Great Job! Love it!

Simone Spinozzi

I think we changed that to Xlargos refugees rather than Xlargos war victims. To avoid misundertandings. Other than that i think we're nearing the last steps!