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[concept ] Backing card design
🕑 Added 2019-07-22 17:23:36 +0000 UTCAs a result of the poll, the frog won and I ordered sample last week.
Soon we can see prototype's picture🥳
I'm so nervous because I changed the factory this time. Wish me luck!😬
Waiting for a picture of the sample, I did the backing card design.
I think it would be nice if there are another frog friends beside pin.
Because this fruit frog illustration was originally a set of 3 fruits.
The text and frog's lines are gold foil part.
Here is other friends version..
Maybe it's too complicated.
- Golden poison lemon frog
- Golden Lemon poison frog
- Lemon & Golden poison dart frog
Which title would be natural?
The order of English words is really confusing for me😅
One more! eyeglass cloth design poll is a toss-up.
If you didn't vote yet, you can change the result!
I'm glad you guys like both freshwater and marine life.
Thanks!
![[concept ] Backing card design](https://img5.leaqio.com/storage/4/cm/up/9e04c0-019e8c3b-319d-786b-86b4-e9258aae87e8.jpg)
Comments
pikaole
Now I knew for sure that numbers and opinions should come first!! This frog's real name is 'golden poison dart frog'. For example, it becomes 'three cute lemon gold poison darts frogs', right? As many people agree, I will remove the 'golden' word ☺️ Thank you so much :D
HugsForBugs
So you can say “three cute square soda bottles” but not “cute three square soda bottles” So... Poison lemon frog implies the lemons are poisonous. We call them poison dart frogs, so it sounds super weird without the “dart” and makes “lemon poison frogs” sound confusing. Golden lemon poison frog sounds particularly strange because, for someone who doesn’t know the name, poison sounds like it should be in the “qualifier” category and is conjugated wrong. It ends up sounding like it should be “poisonous golden lemon frog”
pikaole
Ohhhh! I see. It makes sense. I thought lemon was fruits, I almost forgot that it could mean color at the same time like orange😂 Thanks for kind explanation Sara!
HugsForBugs
Lemon poison dart frog The rule in English for adjective order is: Quantity or number Quality or opinion Size Age Shape Color Proper adjective (often nationality, other place of origin, or material) Purpose or qualifier Lemon is a color, not a shape, so it goes first. Poison dart frog is the common name of the genus.
