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NHRK Chapter 34 (modified)

🕑 Added 2023-06-15 02:32:23 +0000 UTC

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Northstar

I think a ninshu "shrine" would have been more fitting than a "church" doubt naruto even knows what a church is.

Lost Samurai

fixed it, thanks!

Lost Samurai

You're right! I will take that into consideration as I undergo my edit. Thanks for the feedback!

David Hedges

The second problem is that there already is a "church of ninshu" in the setting. Ninshu is both a technique and a philosophy in the Naruto setting. Every one of the monks and their temples in every country are 'churchs' and 'priests' of ninshu. BTW, ninshu is basically magic buddism with the Sage of Six Paths being budda, in case you didn't know. So his idea isn't actually new at all, and it won't actually somehow solve the worlds problems because if that worked the mobks would have done so already. Maybe you could go with the angle that Naruto is trying to change the philosophy to something else, but keep the same technique component? But even still it would have to have some major difference from the buddism ninshu to be believable.

David Hedges

There are a couple serious problems with your church idea. The first is the themes and imaginary the word "church" imply are very christian which doesn't match the 'japanese' feeling of the setting at all. It just feels like it doesn't belong, especially as the person who came up with the word/idea is an in-universe character and not from our world at all. In fact, as there has never been a christianity in the Naruto world, the word "church" shouldn't exist at all. If you want an in-theme and in-setting word you could go with temple, shrine, or sanctuary.

Phoenix

Good chapter. Though there is one grammatical error. I do believe that "hurted" is not a word. It should be just "hurt." Near the paragraph where Haku woke up and noticed the bound Zabuza.


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