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NHRK Chapter 36 (modified)

🕑 Added 2023-06-22 00:41:35 +0000 UTC

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Frankie Escobar

I got to agree with Tyler, at the beginning of the story I petty much like where the story was heading, Naruto in another reality where the events that happen in his universe hasn't happen yet. Alot of could happen it doesn't always have to focus on the sexual. This story has so much to potential, plus if you keep writing about sex it'll loses it fun and becomes boring, so how about more fights and interaction between his friends. And one another thing I think that the villains should get stronger just to give Naruto a fight cause if Naruto is just going overpower very one then what are the risk? Naruto needs his villains to get stronger, I'm not saying right of the bat make it one them fought Naruto and realize that he's to strong for a kid his age that they have no choice but to get strong

Tyler

I'm enjoying the story so far but I do wish the story was more prevalent. It feels like the instant he hit 18 the story fell to the way side and its all smut now. I'm sure that was always going to be the case but I'll admit having 900 handjobs and blowjobs isn't nearly as interesting as your character writing has been.

Dreadix

first waifu obtained....


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