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No North - Book 1 - Page 95

🕑 Added 2023-01-06 14:11:59 +0000 UTC
No North - Book 1 - Page 95

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Kajlilaro

Oof thats some angst😳

AeroDog

Haha, this is so funny! XD I was getting so absorbed in where we were going with the duo's journey to Oddwind and Martin's interest in the compass that I almost completely forgot about his original intent to go to Newport and meet with Chabot! I have no idea how such an important chunk of plot slipped my mind! :D This must be some storytelling technique you guys were using here. Forgive my ignorance, but I'm not much of a writer. I can also really sympathize with Shorty in this page, as I know all too well that feeling of struggling to get ahead and having only one last chance at that big break. His desperation and determination are very appreciable to me. Also, if you don't mind if I offer a small suggestion: in the third word bubble in the bottom panel, "on" should be "in". That would be a little bit more correct in the context of that sentence. Congrats on the new helping hand! His gallery is impressive. I'm glad this comic has so much support, and that I did my little bit to help get you there! Awesome page as always Skailla, can't wait to see what happens next!


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