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Second Draft: Playing with Priestesses

🕑 Added 2024-02-26 15:56:57 +0000 UTC

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Richard Weems

As with most stories, additional character development is necessary to keep readers invested. What is Cassandra's past, ergo her motivations stemming from it. Naturally, there are obstacles to overcome which stimulate change ( I.e growth). Pardon my verbal meandering. I hit a roadblock in my own writing. Keep up the great work.


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