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Every Way, Shape, and Form - Part 2

🕑 Added 2023-02-25 05:54:09 +0000 UTC

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Jessica Thence

This went from dark to kind of a little sweet!

Emory Ahlberg

Maybe I'll revisit one day, Bosmer. Thank you very much!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Jen!

Jennifer

Aww I love it!! I loved how sweet "Rocco" really is. One of my favorite tropes has always been the big scary dude with a heart of gold. This is definitely a unique and fun twist lol

MaggieHeels

Everybody here knows that already that almost every (if not every) TG caption from Emory deserves to be a pilot for a 10+ season long story right? ❣️❣️❣️

Female-Bosmer-Always

My goodness, Emory I see a lot of potential. Jack and Jill potential. The Spider seems like a swell guy, ridding the world of monsters and helping and sheltering those in need who are threatened by monsters. The actress/model playing Marissa could definitely play the role of Holly/Holden Monroe. This Spider seems to me like the polar opposite of Mr. Xu, or maybe I'm just reading and understanding the caption wrongly. You decide, my darling muse and inspiration.

Katiebee

Amazing writing Emory!! Loved it <3

MaggieHeels

OMFG Emory what did you do here... Don't you dare to tell us this is the end of this story... we need to know her new name at least... ❣️❣️❣️I'll find you like... female Liam Neeson and... will give you so much pleasure you'll write part 3 twice as long as this... 😘🥰😍🫠

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Autumn. 💖 I loved writing their dialogue so I'm glad that came through. I like the idea of the "tough guy" language coming from the cute auburn-haired girl. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Ella! It does seem like a pretty humane way to send "nice" mobsters out to pasture...in bikinis. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Yay! Must...resist...temptation...to...write....backstories...

Autumn Rovers

The way you write dialogue is amazing, it just flows so well.. and i agree with everyone else, this needs chapters. You are fantastic at creating worlds.

Ella Cherry

Love the whole thing! The characters, the story. Would love to see more of Rocco, Spider and the other girls!

Alyson Greaves

Yeah this is fantastic 🤩

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks so much, Zoe! I'm... kind of in love with them all? 😂

Emory Ahlberg

Aaaaa. Thank you, Skye! I really enjoyed this idea, too. Obviously, since I wrote more than I intended. I liked the idea of inherently good men stuck in a world trying to make them bad...but them resisting to the utmost, even if their exterior seemed otherwise. 😊