The Price of Love
🕑 Added 2023-10-06 01:39:16 +0000 UTCBack in July, we had a "You Write the Caption" contest. It was so fun! There was one winer, but many of you had wonderful stories and ideas. At the time, I said I wanted to adapt more of them.
Well, here is the first!
This one (which turned out pretty long) is from a story idea written by Diana!
Thank you, Diana! I hope I did a good job with my adaptation. ❤️
Comments
Emory Ahlberg
Thank you, Stacy! This was a nice one. 💖
stacy C
Lovely stuff :-) x
Emory Ahlberg
Thank you, maven! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Diana's story was a great mix of dark and light. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
Thank you, Maggie! 😊 Every once in a while, a happily ever after is nice.
Emory Ahlberg
Wow... I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Alison! 💖 Sometimes it's fun to play with the heartstrings a little. 😊
Emory Ahlberg
Thank you! 😊 And yes, sorry, I haven't had a chance to read through it yet, but I'm intrigued! 💖
Emory Ahlberg
Oops! Thank you, CK. Fixed! 💖
maven poulter
Very interesting twist to the normal tales. Great story!
MaggieHeels
So beautiful ❣️❣️❣️The biggest cheer when Alanna finally found herself in peace...
ckarya
Hi Emory, I think there is a small typo on page 3, in the last sentence, I think it is Michael and not Alan that is correct.😉 "But with every kiss, with every loving word, Alan felt a pang of guilt. He was living a lie. He wasn't Alanna; he was Alan. He wondered if Michael would still love him if he knew the truth. Probably not. After all, Alan was straight."
Alison St John
Oh my goodness, that was an exceptional tale of how someone who couldn't accept who they were becoming someone else, the further the reasoning for transitioning got the further it was to being trapped but love above all perseveres in the end and self acceptance is gained at the end, amazing piece of work Emory ❤️
Female-Bosmer-Always
Another beautiful heartwarming caption story, my muse. You never told me what you think of mine, even though they occur firmly within your Xuniverse.
Emory Ahlberg
It was my pleasure, Diana! ❤️
Diana Bialaska Hansen
Thank you! Love to see you adapt this one. :)
Emory Ahlberg
🤣Every once in a while, I'm in a romantic mood! Trust me when I say there's plenty of darkness ahead... hehe
Robertlouis
Ah, Emory. Things were going SO well, and then you had to go and spoil them with that damn happy ending. What’s got into you, girl? 😉
Emory Ahlberg
Thank you, Gemma! ❤️ Yes, I think she was becoming happier and happier the more girly she became and just didn't notice right away. 😊
Gemma
Another beautiful story Emory. Alana looks so beautiful and with Michael I can see that she will adjust to and embrace her new status and life as Michael’s bride (no regrets)