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Changing My Roommate (Redux)

🕑 Added 2023-10-09 09:02:45 +0000 UTC

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Emory Ahlberg

YES! He'd bring Alex like she was a portfolio of his work. 😂

stacy C

Alex seems to have all the attributes to be a perfect worker for Second Dawn.....he could even take Jordan with him to the interview as an example of his commitment hehe x

Emory Ahlberg

Irons in the fire is a good thing! (beautiful and terrifying is an apt description indeed!)

Female-Bosmer-Always

I will second the motion, my dearest muse. Good idea Robert. 2) Yes, Robert but this man isn't running a global slavery operation like Xu, Davis, Kaschak, and who know how many other monsters? You do remember? What Kaschak threatened to do to Adele if she loses to Jill; and she will lose categorically as Jill is fully assimilated to her new "everything". Not to mention Kaschak treating sweet Olivia like his personal cum-dumpster.

Emory Ahlberg

😂 I love how "evil" Alex (the narrator) believes himself to be - but I think there was a girl inside Jordan the whole time!

Emory Ahlberg

Yay! Thanks so much, Sam. It was really fun to revisit this one. I'm thinking of "remastering" more older stories, as well.

Emory Ahlberg

🥰 Thank you, Maggie!

Robertlouis

I wonder if you - and Ashley, of course - might consider a continuation. It’s a deliciously tantalising place to stop! And a heads up to Xu and Second Dawn: who needs a private island and an army of goons when this guy has shown us that all you need is a wicked imagination, a bottle of scotch and access to a pharmacy? 😈

Female-Bosmer-Always

Realize how late I am in posting my reply. So unlike me, my muse. However, my mind has been quite busy with my own characters in your beautiful; if terrifying at times; Xuniverse and how they will interact with each other...and with yours. For example, Summer Chastity Crowe™© feeling guilty for her "transformation" and thinking herself an abomination in the eyes of her family for not resisting. So many irons in the fire, as they say.

Gemma

I also remember that story. Oh to dream. Where do you find these flat mates? Fantastic art work as always Emory.

MaggieHeels

🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍

Samanda

Good story and great art! I really enjoyed this one.

Emory Ahlberg

Absolutely! Please send them my way. 😊

non anon

If you're taking recommendations for stories to illustrate I have a few that I've enjoyed that I'd throw in for sure! If done well seems like a great way to collaborate and bring attention to more writers.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Robert. 😊 Yeah, I feel like Jordan jumps off the page much better in this updated version 4 years later. Maryanne is a very good writer! And I actually did a story of Maryanne's called "Cabin Girl" that's also perhaps due for an update... https://www.patreon.com/posts/cabin-girl-28033628

Emory Ahlberg

Yay! I'm so happy you liked it, Autumn! I had fun redoing the images. I really like how they turned out. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Imagining both of us scouring Fictionmania for that ONE good story like miners delving for that nugget of gold. Then, at long last... "Eureka!"

Emory Ahlberg

It's so annoying! What I do is download the PDF and open it outside of the app. On my phone, that allows me to view it landscape. Also, you can open Patreon on Chrome or Safari and it will let you view in landscape, too.

GayVampire69

Anyone know if it's still possible to view the pages in landscape mode in the new updated mobile app version of patreon? I'm no longer able get the images to rotate :/

Robertlouis

I remember both the story and your illustrated version of it, but this is so much better. Yes, rendering technology has improved hugely in the interim, but your own skill, particularly your unique sensibility in subtly portraying emotion has improved immeasurably as well. As to future collaboration with other authors - and I can’t wait for the next instalment of your joint venture with the estimable Ms Greaves - what about Maryanne Peters? I know that her prolificness (is that a thing?) divides opinion, but I think that her consistency is remarkable and that her skill as a writer of short stories in mood-setting and economy is unsurpassed. She’d be a mistress of her trade in any genre. And the brevity and concision of her tales would lend themselves very well to your preferred two to six render style of storytelling too. What do you think? xx