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Queen's Gambit, Part 3

🕑 Added 2023-08-12 09:05:26 +0000 UTC

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Emory Ahlberg

I hope you enjoy, Part 4, Lampy as she begins to come into her own!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Estacia. This is really scratching my "epic" itch!

Emory Ahlberg

Can't wait to see what you think of Part 4. 💖

Emory Ahlberg

Well-said indeed!

Emory Ahlberg

I do indeed... as you're about to read. Thank you, Robert!

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! I hope you like part 4!

Emory Ahlberg

I do indeed, Robert. That's a lovely name for a girl. 😊

Robertlouis

Alaria has an easy ring to it, don’t you think? 😉

Ella Cherry

I love this story, and indeed the images are fantastic! Thanks, Emory! ❤️

Wojtek

I agree with Pelicanboss, this is a beautiful story whose culmination, could be the acceptance of his current position. Maybe the meeting with the elders will even convince Alaric to choose a female name (or let Rowena choose one for him). People will need a name that gives them hope. "Prince at heart, but a queen at image" beautifully said. Alaric's image as queen is so beautiful 😍!

Pelicanboss

Reading all three parts of this beautiful story I see you've created a hero. Alaric is a survivor but still needs to accept himself before he can do good to his people and that's what is just starting to happen. This is definitely a story to develop. I love it.

Lampy

It makes me picture his transformation. I wonder if it was slow - a dawning realisation? In the middle of ordering his men about when his voice cracks. Waking in the night to discover his waist cinching? His feet slowly becoming to small for his boots. The first person to mention the word 'woman' or 'maiden' around him. EDIT - just realised there's a parts 1 and 2 which answer that 😂

Maggie Heels

I'm literally melting 🫠🫠🫠 This is so beautiful... can't wait for more ❣️❣️❣️

Alex From the Tri-Cities

I really like the cold gaze in her eyes on the last page of the captions. They say revenge is a dish that is best served cold. another splendid work my darling muse and inspiration. On a even better note, it looks like my monthly payment went through, look like Patreon fixed whatever was ailing them, unless I totally missed something.

Robertlouis

I’m really enjoying it too, Emory. There’s plenty going on without any actual action happening , as Alaric - silly name for a beautiful woman - comes to terms with her new self and all that it means. I presume you’ve already got the rest of the tale more or less mapped out, but there’s scope here for a full saga if you wanted to develop it into one.