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Rebirthday

🕑 Added 2023-11-05 23:16:05 +0000 UTC

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Emory Ahlberg

LOL - Which is shockingly easy to do!

Bowie897

Marla is so evil... that she transitioned the balloon from Mickey Mouse to Minnie Mouse!!!

Emory Ahlberg

Well, Marla might not be a member of Second Dawn. There seem to be plenty of "syndicates" making women of men out there! And even if she were, there don't seem to be many rules. Each of them operates as their own. I suspect Marla was proving a point, demonstrating her power and control.

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Ella! It's always fun to write characters who aren't afraid to speak their mind, even if they're a bit wicked!

Emory Ahlberg

Maggie, I do love your ideas! And you're right, Charlotte still has her hacking skills. The transformation didn't take that away. And perhaps the experience has humbled her and made her more cautious. But I think her exact line of action will be determined by how she adjusts to her new reality and what she values the most - revenge, redemption, or simply survival. 😉

Female-Bosmer-Always

I never understood, my muse, how the Second Dawn makes their choices...why Marla didn't just kill him instead. I mean from what Mr. Xu told Jill when they had a tête-à-tête conversation...closest thing between father and child having "The Talk"...if you ask me, Xu made it clear the Dawn isn't above mass-murder, which really brought tears to my eyes. Marla seems a little less murderous, but no less ruthless and merciless. P.S. You have not made it explicit that Marla is in Second Dawn, for if she was, she would've told Charlotte about Xu's protocol to frighten her even more and keep her quiet.

Ella Cherry

Love a good punishment! 😈 The dialogue is so good in this one. Marla is so witty!

Maggie Heels

OK, ok, ok... listen... this can't end like this.... she still has quite fancy hacking skills right? She tripped cause she was overconfident (male pride?) now she will be more careful... my suggestion is that as a follow-up she deplete Marla's private account a bit (ok significantly) and leave her business card with a note that if she wants the cash back then hire her as an IT security expert... and if she refuses then soon she will be penniless and every mafia that exists will be looking for her... 🤭🤭🤭❣️❣️❣️