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The Catch - Chapter 8

🕑 Added 2024-07-27 22:43:58 +0000 UTC
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8
The Catch - Chapter 8

Comments

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you, Mark! I'm so glad you liked it! More to come. 😊

Emory Ahlberg

Oh, I totally understand where you're coming from, Tim. It seems like in this chapter both Ant and Michael are struggling with themselves - fighting what feels inevitable. For Michael, that means being terrified of Antonia leaving him without their romance even beginning... For Ant, that's the realization that he's ENJOYING being Antonia far more than he thought possible when this all started. Now it seems like Antonia is firmly in control of both Anthony AND Michael. 😉

Emory Ahlberg

Thank you so much, Omaga! I totally agree with you on the character development. Ant is certainly coming into his / her own! And Michael certainly seems to be falling more under the spell of the woman he's creating. That's probably not what he expected!

Emory Ahlberg

Thanks, Bos! 😂 Although, those tubes you mentioned don't sound like a bad idea!

Emory Ahlberg

What did you think, Maggie??

Mark Schippers

Finally🥰

Tim

I must admit I saw this chapter as "confusing" -- for Anthony, for Michael and for me -- through the first 24 pages. But all confusion was erased in the final 3-4 pages. The clarity and promise evident in Antonia's epiphany just gave me so much joy and hope for what lies ahead for the two protagonists. I'm really looking forward to Chapter 9 and beyond.

Omagathief

Excellent storytelling in this chapter, I couldn’t put it down. Amazing character development for both Michael and Anthony/Antonia, a good look behind the curtain of their respective psyches and how they are both dealing with how “the contract” is affecting them ❤️❤️🥰

Alex From the Tri-Cities

Muse Emory, muse Alyson, you had me a Skull Fucker Coffee and the No Wi-Fi. It's like you're healing mankind by getting them way from their blue screens and boob tubes (as in TV, no tubes that causes breast growth).

Maggie Heels

Start reading just now ❣️


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