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Chapter 660 : A Weird Combination...

🕑 Added 2024-06-05 17:11:00 +0000 UTC

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Jack Nathaniel Mikhail

Many thanks for the chapter ☺️

Devil Hex

I like it, lol. Helps correct all the errors I missed out while editing. Feel free to recommend if you see any :)

IS3

Bro what’s with all the grammar nazis in your comment section today 😂

Devil Hex

👍

Devil Hex

Thanks. Interconnected one. That is kinda canon. Changing it would change a lot of things 😅 Naruto was always shown to be someone who worked very hard to gain his strength (or gain it from some unique or weird ideas which mostly involved a Shadow Clone) instead of being super talented. At least until Hagoromo decided to bless him that is, lol. Another case you could consider (though related to just this fanfic) would be Fujin and Kakashi. In terms of talent, Kakashi is definitely ahead of Fujin. Only aspect where Fujin is better is Wind affinity and space-time affinity. Yet Fujin is significantly stronger than Kakashi despite being a decade younger even if we don't consider FTG.

Kelevra

Did you understand Naruto - Do you understand Naruto* - While probably technically correct it sounds awkward in speech 💁🏽‍♂️ Fujin is inscribing seals directly onto the Kunai? And ten separate regulars explosive seals or a special interconnected one 🤔 Making Naruto so untalented rubs me a little wrong, but to be fair it’s the only way to make his characters strength curve believable, based on Fujins efforts and his strength curve

CloneOfClone

The iconic entrance was preserved 🙏

rain

"He is that pervert!" = "He's that pervert!" I just think it flows better, there isnt really a need for an extra word

Devil Hex

👍

Rubén López

Uff ahora Naruto, no puede conformarse fácilmente, después de tener a Fujin como un guia por bastante tiempo.

Greedsmith

“As ordered by Hiruzen, he took control of the spy network Kumo and Iwa by the evening.” network of Kumo* “Even the beast inside Naruto was surprised to hear such words.” Thank you for finally incorporating a bit of Kurama’s pov again, though I would’ve liked a bit more of it. Maybe for when Naruto finally meets him, he’ll make comments about Fujin?

Devil Hex

Might work considering how much destruction it causes at microscopic level. Though considering how weird Orochimaru is, it wouldn't be a surprise if he was still able to heal...

shrekk

Is the rasenshiruken a direct counter to orochimaru skin shedding Technique?

StinkyFard

pervy* gotta love autocorrect

StinkyFard

Percy Sage 🙏


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