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To Break A Curse: Pt3 (Com)

🕑 Added 2024-12-13 04:01:49 +0000 UTC
To Break A Curse: Pt3 (Com)

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last_of_workers

I completely agree with you on all points!

Riley

Maggie's awesome, she's a true friend, basically a sister. I don't think the wedding was really talked about, but Maggie would have been maid of honor. As for it taking longer, I had so many notes underneath the story while writing it to keep track of the timeline. I also thought making her have a kid than another kid would be slightly unreasonable, since as we have seen, she was a new mother, and tired all the time, so it feels more natural the way it played out where the kids happen about every two years and not really on purpose.

last_of_workers

As I thought, the last step on Jasper's path to lifting the curse turned out to be the longest and most laborious, but on the other hand, now she is creating her own large and full-fledged family! and besides this, I like that you did not forget about Magie and she appears again and again in this story as Jasper's best friend, which makes the story more alive and believable! In general, thank you very much Riley for this story!


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