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Melody’s Christmas Ball (TG-Empress)

🕑 Added 2025-01-12 03:57:00 +0000 UTC
Melody’s Christmas Ball (TG-Empress)

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Riley

The love triangle feels more like tug of war, with Melody being the rope C: As for Alexander, he seems to keep appearing, as if by fate. Who knows what will come of him and his quest to claim the heart of Melody, but you're right, Melody will soon have to figure out who she is. As for Stefanie, a witch's secrets are her own C:

last_of_workers

this is a VERY good story and I liked it VERY much but let's take it point by point and the very first point here is the love triangle between Melody, Nadine and Alexander ... let's be honest Alexander is not going anywhere and he will appear again and again in Melody's life which means that sooner or later she will have to decide WHO SHE IS, what she wants and who she will be next ... the most obvious and at the same time for many reasons the most unlikely option is a heart-to-heart talk ... it doesn't matter with whom but in this conversation there should be no lies, no excuses, no secrets ... and this is difficult ... the other option is much simpler but it is essentially a dead end - to ignore the problem until it resolves itself, but this option is a dead end ... in general, the so-called "conflict" is brewing and what its outcome will be we have yet to find out ... let's move on to something more positive, namely the opinion that Stefanie used magic to make herself bigger ... I will not say that this is impossible but personally I am of the opinion that magic has nothing to do with it and it's all about banal genetics and good luck... i think i said all i wanted to... i wish you good luck riley with the rest of your stories

Riley

I think you're seeing things C: Jokes aside, it was merely a mistake.

12Animefan21

Wow, another great chapter of the story. I love how you use my ideas. I'm already looking forward to the next part. <3 Just one small thing: why do they leave from Nadine's house now, even though Nadine picked up Melody in the last caption. XD


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