Riley Gendreau
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The Flower Girl (Com)
🕑 Added 2025-03-03 00:17:20 +0000 UTCA commission for WildCirno
It was a bright sunny day and in town there was a big cosplay convention being held. Breanna wasn’t really into that kind of thing but her boyfriend Allen was, and he had jumped the gun a bit by buying two tickets before asking her if she’d go with him.
It wasn’t that she hated that kind of thing; she did like dressing up in costumes, but being a transwoman and going in public alone can be quite scary, nevermind such a big event. It would also be her first time wearing a female costume in person.
Her costume was based on Aerith Gainsborough, more specifically her amazing red dress. Breanna loved the dress, and ever since she had it made, she sneaks it out from time to time to wear it and dance around.
After some convincing from Allen, Breanna agreed to go, so long as he stays with her the whole time. He of course agreed, saying that would be the best part. After that, the two of them went and started to get into their costumes.
Breanna brushed her hair out, put it in a wig cap, put her wig on, then got her waist cincher and panties on. She then grabbed her dress and slipped it up all the way. After that, she started to apply makeup.
Her dress still needed to zip it up in the back but couldn’t do that on her own. So she got her heels on and went to find Allen to ask him to do it. She found him in the bathroom flexing in his Zach costume. Breanna saw him and started to giggle.
Allen noticed her and his jaw dropped. The first thing he said was how beautiful she was; the second was how jealous she was of how good she is at cosplaying. He looked in the mirror and said he looked like a mess, yet she looked like she jumped out of the game.
Breanna blushed and thanked him for being so nice. He also helped remove some of the anxiety she was feeling about going out. Breanna then stepped behind Allen and told him she’d help him get his wig on properly and touch up his face, then they could go.
Some time later, they arrive at the convention and start walking around. There were so many people that Breanna started to get nervous and extremely embarrassed. She moved closer to Allen and he wrapped his arm around hers and held her hand, telling her it would be alright.
The two of them then head to the merchant table area and start to browse items. They had everything from anime and video games to random other junk like items for Witchcraft. Breanna really liked that kind of stuff, so she dragged Allen over to one of the booths.
The merchant showed Breanna a green stone and told her it was capable of making good things happen to the one who wears it. Breanna wasn’t that gullible, but she found the stone to be cute, so she bought it and put it on her necklace.
Breanna fiddled with it as she walked with Allen for a while, wondering what good things would happen to her if it were real. She had a few ideas, but she knew those things couldn’t possibly happen, so she gave up thinking about it and continued to enjoy the convention.
A couple hours pass, and slowly, over that time, Breanna starts to feel weird. Not like she was sick, but like her body felt different, so she went to the bathroom, and Allen stood outside the door in case she needed him, like he always did when they were in public.
Once inside, Breanna notices herself in the mirror. She could have sworn she looked slimmer, perhaps even curvier than normal, not to mention her chest looked fuller. None of that made any sense, so she thought she was just exhausted and seeing things.
Breanna goes to the toilet and pulls up her dress and drops her underwear. She goes to let it all out when she notices something was wrong. As a transwoman, she was born with certain parts she didn’t like, and currently she couldn't feel that part.
Breanna had been planning and saving for bottom surgery, but until then it meant she had to deal with those unwanted parts, yet somehow suddenly they were gone. Breanna had to double check if what she suspected was true.
Once she did, she stood up in a bit of a panic. She pulled her underwear up and dropped her dress. She then opened the bathroom door and pulled Allen inside. He seemed confused and didn’t say anything because he knew Breanna would only pull him in if it were serious.
He was ready to help in any way. She asked Allen to unzip her dress, which he did. Breanna dropped her dress to the floor and looked at herself while Allen continued to look confused. Breanna asked him if she looked different.
Allen said somewhat, but he thought it was because of the costume. Breanna removed her waist cincher and both of them realized her body was different when her nice curves didn’t change at all. Breanna then tried to remove her wig but found it was attached to her head.
Breanna quickly turned towards the mirror and looked at herself. She started to take deep breaths as she realized somehow her wig had become real, and her body completely transformed to look like Aerith’s from Final Fantasy VII, the person she was cosplaying.
Breanna was bright red and embarrassed. She looked at Allen and shouted; she became a woman. Allen let out an awkward smile and reminded her she had already been one. Breanna held her head and said he knew what she was talking about.
Breanna started to have a panic attack, and she was worried something really bad was going on when it wasn’t. Allen saw her, got close to her and hugged her tightly. He whispered into her ear and told her everything was alright and that this wasn’t a bad thing.
Breanna hugged him back while lightly crying into his shoulder. Breanna suddenly remembered the day that she came to Allen as trans. She was freaking out after admitting it, and she thought her life was over. Allen took her in his arms just like this, held her tightly, and told her that wasn’t the case.
He told her that her real, authentic life was just about to begin. Allen was one of the first people to support her in this journey and had been there every step of the way; it’s one of the things she loved most about him and makes her feel lucky everyday that he’s her boyfriend.
Breanna finally calmed down, and Allen let go and looked her in the eyes and smiled. He said that this was a bit sudden and scary, so he understood why she was panicking, but he had to say that it sounded like a good thing.
Breanna, having calmed down and was now thinking clearly, realized he was right. This was all she ever wanted; she had the body she had always wanted and all the parts that come with it. Breanna was nearly in tears again, thinking about how amazing this all was.
Allen held her again, and after a few minutes she stopped crying and was just happy. She then let out a yawn and asked Allen if they could head home early as she was suddenly wiped out. He nodded and handed her back her dress.
Breanna asked how any of this was possible and poked the stone she had gotten earlier and said it must have actually worked, and as a side effect of giving her the body she always dreamed of, it turned her into the person she was cosplaying. Breanna looked surprised and said that was so cool.
She was more than happy to look like Aerith and to look as good as she does in a sexy red dress. Breanna continues to be happy about her change as they walk to the car, but then she suddenly realized she had another problem; she was going to have to tell her mother.
Breanna’s panic started to return and Allen put his hand on her hand. He told her it would be okay; her mother, while still not entirely understanding it, had made great progress in accepting Breanna for who she is.
Breanna calmed down again, smiled, and told him he was right. Though her mother was quite the unpredictable person. Breanna remembered the day she came out as trans to her mother, and her mother really didn't respond.
For a while she thought Breanna was just a feminine gay guy, but since then she’s come to understand that Breanna’s just a woman. Not once did she ever get angry or upset about Breanna being trans.
However, she did get really mad when Breanna finally introduced her mother to her boyfriend Allen. She had told her about him a lot but left out the fact that he was white because she knew how her mother could be about her partners that had a different ethnicity.
She started to yell at Breanna, but Allen took the blame for everything and eventually calmed her down, and even though Breanna’s mother won’t admit it, he won her over like he had done with Breanna.
So she agreed to approve of Allen dating her daughter as long as he doesn’t break her heart, which Breanna found absolutely amazing, as it was one of the first times she called Breanna her daughter; of course that special moment was ruined moments later by her mother.
She told Allen he’d find himself gutted and fed to pigs if he hurt Breanna in any way, to which he smiled and said it was a deal. Breanna snapped out of her reminiscing and got into the car with Allen.
Allen was right; this was a good thing and something she’d always wanted. She wasn’t going to let herself panic about it again; no matter what happens, she’ll love her mother, Allen, and most importantly herself.
Comments
Riley
I mentioned Breanna being trans in the beginning: "It wasn’t that she hated that kind of thing; she did like dressing up in costumes, but being a transwoman and going in public alone can be quite scary, nevermind such a big event. " It was requested that I mention how it would be easier for her to tell her mother she became a woman then that her boyfriend was white. It's not typical something I write about, but I did my best. It was also put towards the end of the idea, so that's what I did. As the image should really be enough to tell you her ethnicity, and that was mostly to show more of him being supportive no matter what, especially about things they couldn't control. As for the wing thing, I went and fixed that. I had reworked the story because I didn't like where certain things were. I missed that part, so thanks for letting me know C:
last_of_workers
I like this story, it's quite light and very kind in my opinion, it's really very good, 10 out of 10... But I can't help but mention a few downsides that are downsides purely for me and spoil the whole good picture a little for me personally... The first downside (although most likely it was originally intended that way, but personally it spoiled my perception of the story a little) is that you mention that Breanna is a transsexual only in the middle of the story... But this is subjective and most likely it was intended that way... The second downside, which has nothing to do with the idea of the story but just appears suddenly, is that you talk about Breanna's skin color almost at the end... It's strange to me... Well, and the third small nuance is that at a certain point you talk twice in different paragraphs about Breanna noticing that she no longer wears a wig... Most likely it's just a million, but if not, then again it looks a little strange... In other words, these are just nitpicks and if you don't pay attention to these little things, then the rest of the story is wonderful and I really liked it.
