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🕑 Added 2019-12-22 21:31:05 +0000 UTC
Afterthoughts and News
Hello everyone! This is going to be more of a self-critique of the latest comic that I’ve finished, the Party. I’m just going to give a little info on some of the reasons that it turned out the way it did. So here we go!
I apologize in advance, I really suck at writing...so I hope that I get my point across.
When I first started this comic I’ve had a very vague idea where I wanted it to go. And because of that I think that’s the biggest reason why I felt it suffered. I didn’t have a plan, didn’t have any idea how long I’ve wanted it to be, and how far I was willing to take it when it came to mature stuff. A while back I took a break on the Party because I was still dipping my toes in NSFW and got a little chicken with that sort of content. Now I’m getting more into it and I hope that I can do a better job when it comes to determine how to continue.
The reason why I sort of ended like I did was that I was starting to get bored with it. Without a plan I was constantly trying to figure out exactly how it should end. I didn’t want to drag it out, but I didn’t just want to stop and not finish it either. So that’s why it turned out the way it did.
For future projects I’m going to make sure that it has a beginning and an end planned out ahead of time and put more thought into the story. I want to make sure that it’s not just a half-thought jumbled mess. Also do add dialogue! I need to improve on that as well.
In the mean time, I’m going to work on mini-comics for a bit. With the limit to 3-5 pages because not really ready to get into anything longer until I have a fully planned comic set. I’ve got a couple plans! And I hope you like what’s to come!
I also want to thank all of you who have supported this project thus far and I hope to improve greatly for everything coming out next year!
Comments
Don't worry, that series was great!
Thuasluhuall
In my opinion the ending was was okay, I just would have perferred at least few more panels with daisy growing. Maybe her dancing with Luigi as the shrooms start kicking in and she swells blissfully unaware as she ride the high, much to Luigi's surprise. Meanwhile Peach and daisy bail as Mario misses seeing them, but that's just me.
Jbulleit97
I also felt the ending just sort of happened, but the ride was at least fun. I look forward to future comics benefiting from your experience.
