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Fired 3 part 1
🕑 Added 2022-01-31 19:58:17 +0000 UTC I almost finished this work before I got sick. Now I can finally post it. Tell me what do you think about the text? Is it necessary and is it convenient to read it?
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Hope you're OK. Not sick or caught up in the Ukraine mess? Hoping for more soon.
Stabbing is my favorite! Lovely girl.
decaplover1960
Awe, strangled? I was hoping she'd be stabbed or shot! I prefer no dialog.
For example I would have enjoyed this one just as much or even more without text and hoping for just a random murder/rape scene.
As little text as necessary to provide background to the story is acceptable but I really am fine with no text with a brief description in your comments if you want to lay out the story instead of in the pictures.
Thanks for the new post. Very enjoyable. Your English is fine. Regarding the necessity or amount of text, it is enough of a narrative to put the violence in context. For me, some sort of story adds to the drama. But thatโs just me; others may find the text unnecessary.
