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[M4A] Leaving You Breathless [NSFW Version][MDom] [Choking] [Breathplay] [DubCon][Impreg] [Breeding] [Tentacles] [Eldritch] [Horror] [Exclusive]

🕑 Added 2023-04-28 06:15:45 +0000 UTC

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A Warlock

I've appeared from the YouTube preview of this. I must say, this is one of my favourite audios. It's difficult to find good eldritch stuff. It's also nice to be tucked into bed by a lovecraftian horror ^^

Mac

I’m so sorry for not seeing your message! My notifications have been all over the place. I’m here now, so here’s my feedback! (Feel free to use or ignore, this may just be personal preference as I’m not someone who works with audio) Background ambiance - 10/10 spooky and really sets the tone. Voice lines - 9/10, really nailed the eldritch tone and phrasing. Sound effects - felt like the same clip cycled over and over. Not that there’s anything wrong with that, but I feel it would be beneficial to mix things up every now, and then. A squelch here, a briefly different pace there, not just limited to the two patterns I noticed in here. All in all, a very solid audio!

The stroke Of Midnight

Always, I'm welcome to improving my craft

Mac

May I provide a bit of constructive criticism on this? Minor things, but hopefully you can use this in the future (feel free to swap over to direct messages if you want, either works for me)

The stroke Of Midnight

Why thank you! Honestly it makes me want to do more spooky nsfw audios in the future

Void

I have no clue why, but I wasn’t creeped out at all. Super relaxed and felt oddly protected? Maybe my “creeped out meter” is broken. Anyway I really loved this! Very much enjoyed this, ya did it so perfectly!