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Puck 380 - Even Naughtier Nightie
🕑 Added 2017-03-07 01:33:12 +0000 UTC So here's the original early colored draft of the last panel in Puck #380. The nightie as originally designed was just ... too over the top, even for Phoebe. I tamed it for the actual comic in the following ways:1) I colored in the center panels because having them be cut-outs was just too crazy.
2) I brought the side cut of the nightie over on her boob, because as it stands in this shot, the boob's more out than in.
3) I pulled down the hem of the bottom so it's covering a bit more of her butt.
Censorship in action! Or let's just call it common decency.
Either way, though, you fine people get to see the original.
Comments
Shan Wickremesinghe
MORTAL KOMBAT!<br><br>(Fatality seems imminent ...)
ElectricGecko
Yeah, this is a bit ahead of the game from what I've posted on dA. So it might be a little confusing.
Ricky Fang
Whoa! Some crazy stuff going on here!
ElectricGecko
Well, I could do an Easter voting incentive, but I thought we could do something different this time.
ElectricGecko
There's not much to donate. There's more 'not nightie' than 'nightie' here.
SalemCat
Is it time for the EASTER VOTING INCENTIVE ?
SalemCat
Since you forced Phoebe to stitch herself a more modest nightie, any chance she could donate <i><b>this one</b></i> to Tracee ?
ElectricGecko
This is the size that I generally work on the comic. Or bigger. And sadly, there are a number of times when I'm working on an expression, and the size of the posted comic ends up sort of ruining the effect because of the small size. I COULD post new comics in a larger size here on Patreon, though. I've thought of doing that before.
Dreamy G
Very nice indeed. But the real win of this picture is the close up of Puck's facial expression.
