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Limitless Path Chapter Five Hundred Twenty-Eight

🕑 Added 2025-10-30 17:00:11 +0000 UTC

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PickledTink

---- spending more timing hammering away in the forge. ---- Typo: "time". ---- though she also private thought she could probably take him in a fight. ---- Typo: "privately". ---- but the hills gave enough of a difference in hit and variability ---- Typo: "hit" should be "height". ---- The only real thing she could do was throw herself into the horde, and well before it got close to the walls, and try to break up its momentum as much as possible while starting to rack up her kill count early. ---- Flow is off for the first half. I'd rewrite that as: "The only real thing she could do was throw herself into the horde well before it got close to the walls and try to break up its momentum" ---- it was just something that would be useful, given the numbers estimates ---- I think you could eliminate the comma in the middle of this. ---- On those pleasant thoughts, she threw herself forward, her Spatial Step skill allowing her to traverse multiple miles in a single step. ---- Continuity error: She had already teleported to within "a few hundred yards". Maybe replace "multiple miles" with "the remaining distance"? ---- thrusting into the massive of a bull that tried to gore her. ---- Missing word: "the massive head of a bull" from context. ---- She nimbly dodged the horn even as she recovered from the kicking motion ---- No kick was mentioned, so this seems very out of place. ---- She tried to also be precise ---- Word flow is off. I'd swap tried and also for "She also tried to be precise" ---- despite the urgency of the outbreak, as she wasn't really planning on using her looting skill on these beasts. ---- I'd replace "as" with "though", since her looting skill is stated to not work on corpses she mangles, rather than the implied reverse here. ---- able to almost go on autopilot ---- Word choice. I'd replace with "operating almost on autopilot". ---- oxen were a bit dumb even as compared to other beasts ---- "As" isn't really adding anything in here. Just hanging out. ---- did have slightly limited options ---- Word choice? I'd replace "slightly" with "somewhat" but this is personal preference, I guess. ---- And it a couple dozen ---- Typo: "if", not "it".

Caudyr

Yeah, I was totally reminded of the cow level from Diablo 2. XD

Liraal

time sync -> time sink

outlaw

There is a cow level! 😂 thanks for the chapter!


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