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Luke's Big Butt Chapter 8 (Part 3/3 - WIP)

🕑 Added 2022-11-27 23:25:18 +0000 UTC

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Bella Lime

Glad to see Sammy coming back up and Luke realizing his stupidity (and naiveté)

Charlie Walker

Thank you, I’m always happy to receive constructive feedback.

Charlie Walker

I think I am going to post a “no flashback” version for those who want to focus on the sex, but the official chapter will keep the flashbacks.

William Peightal

I also appreciate putting all this out there, even if you want to tweak it. I have been keen to read this chapter. Thank you for sharing. :)

William Peightal

The sex wasn't weak; It wasn't your strongest. I can appreciate wanting the sex here to be top notch though, so power to you if you want to have another go at it.

William Peightal

I actually appreciated at least the first two flashbacks. It's cute characterization. It wasn't what I wanted as I laid down to read smut.. so I think that got in the way.

Charlie Walker

I know this chapter is not up to the quality everyone expects of me. I’m working on fixing it and will hopefully have an improved chapter out soon.

Great story all three parts!

I don't know. I wasn't feeling any of it. I read the first Incarnation of this story. This being the actual first new story of Luke just. The sex was weak. Back story unnecessary. The best part was his realization about Sammy. Its probably me. I'm a huge fan of your work. As I said I'v read the first jsp, which ended a the last chapter. So I'm alongfor

grkotter91

This was totally worth the wait ☺️ I love the snippets of backstory and how they both give more depth to Coach Tom being conflicted about fucking Luke but also help him realize how much Luke has grown up


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