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Construction Mage - Chapter 27: Roofing

🕑 Added 2025-06-18 02:11:11 +0000 UTC

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mbncd

"As the two humans panicked, the orange car completely ignored their antics" Car should be cat. "Once he finished outlining the rooms, Clay couldn’t help but grin as he walked around aimlessly to inspect the space he could truly call his own. He couldn’t help but imagine it in its completed form. A shelter from the elements he could truly call his own." Saying "he could truly call his own" twice over 3 sentences doesn't sound right. Same with "couldn't help". This whole paragraph is very repetitive.


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