Interdimensional Tournament, Fight 3: Melona vs Yawen (14 Pages)
🕑 Added 2024-12-29 18:00:03 +0000 UTCI think this is my first real gagged tickle work. What do you think?
https://mega.nz/folder/OtlgRLaI#EfE4eVXaVChj-k-ff_VB_w
Comments
YDalfgan
interesting you mention these two, as they would be totally different for me. one is "you can't laugh / talk", so I agree with the first part. the second one is more like "you must keep in the laughter with willpower". Thanks for your input! :)
Misdeter
For me gagging is one of the most exciting optional elements of tickling. It only adds to victim's helplessness. "If you want me to stop just tell me" and other taunts like this when ler knows damn well you can't speak. You can't tell to stop teasing, you can't tell to stop tickling particular spot, you can't tell that you gonna pee yourself... Not only the gag. You're traveling the train on the sly and can't get caught by laughing and someone is tickling your foot sticking out from your hiding spot? You're at the library? You have an important business meeting? Whoops :3
Nick
I enjoyed it yes. But your were asking the description how it’s your first gag work and personally I don’t like gags all that much not saying I didn’t like it
YDalfgan
wait, now I am confused, so do you like it or not? Because you wrote "ending gags aren't my thing"?
Nick
I just like the after fight dialogue it’s cute I’m a sucker for well written text in art I think it adds a lot
YDalfgan
do you mean the after battle interactions? any specific reasons?
Nick
Fun like the ending gags aren’t my thing tho but that’s just me