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Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School (111/?) Revised Version

🕑 Added 2024-12-21 22:00:02 +0000 UTC

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ANTIcarrot

"It was well understood that the principles of Aehtra-Primus were limiting." Typo.

Bbobsillypants

Go for it

BoneBreakerPL

It might not rhyme, but I still like your version. Mind if I steal it? I kinda want to use it now in my Rolę Playing Games ^^ "In propulsion we believe!" Said an engineering pretending to be Yoda

Michael Halpern

that saying is more associated with rockets than aerodynamic flight. In aerodynamic flight, lift-drag ratio is more important than Thrust to Weight,

Michael Halpern

worth noting, that the mana resistant materials don't prevent teleportation

Swan

I'm curious what sort of stellar objects humanity has visited, like 800c isn't that much, but from a back of the envelope calculation, it should mean that the nearest black hole is like 2 years warp travel (one way) away, and the nearest neutron star 0.5 years which seems realistic for a scientific mission (According to wikipedia's list of currently known blackholes/neutron stars). Idk if it'd ever come up, but It'd be funny to break Ilunor's mind with those :)

Kirk Childers

Yep, it screams cage/wall

Tainted_But_Thriving

I also loved the defying gravity reference as you write this around the same time Wicked came out

Skrzynek

This edit is a MASTERFULL way to address the questions people had, and it presents Ilunor's perspective very nicely! The chapter got longer as a result, I feel - but with such an important one, I think it's a positive. Also... That "touch the tapestry and appear in the Transportium Network" seems like more of a defensive enchantment than a naturally occurring thing...

UC-79

I like the perspective change, we get a better grasp on the nexian narrative

Legijas

Didn’t stop her when showing around ARMS

Bbobsillypants

It was a English rhyme that wouldn't have translated properly unfortunately. It likely would have been to the nexians like she just said "in propulsion we believe"

John the Gamer

Awww... I liked the "in Thrust we trust" line from the first version.


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