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Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School (150/?) Revised Version 1

🕑 Added 2025-11-02 17:58:20 +0000 UTC

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Allen Mainville

Emma is literally never going to hear the end of the arachnid jokes from Thalmin until she reveals her human form at this point.

Skrzynek

Good. I always prefer that both the good guys and the bad guys show how *smart* they are, instead of just bumping into each other at (in)opportune times due to author's will. While the previous version was understandable, with Emma just having drones on charge-up, and explaining that might be enough to make previous version work - here we see both Emma and Ignalius be SMART and COMPETENT in order to get to a similar situation as before. I vastly prefer this. Especially since it gives us the OUTSTANDING bit about claw machines and Emma "shrimping" as she finagles with it! :D The only two things that I find in any way unclear are: - the "few klicks away" part, where Emma got apparently talked to from kilometers away - but that got addressed on voice chat already so no more pestering from me. - how come Emma's SUR-Drone was not able to come down to the forest floor near the shard for a few minutes? Either it was really, really saving up on the battery power, or the forest was trying to prevent it getting closer to the offering. Perhaps both? But regardless, just minor nitpicks about an overall PHENOMENAL revision! :D


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