GothMommyAsmr
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WIPs for Pride - an F4TM and F4TF script
🕑 Added 2024-06-12 19:34:03 +0000 UTCMy friend comes tonight and tomorrow I move. Wish me luck! If you wanna help with my move, feel free to send me a tip on ko-fi. https://ko-fi.com/gothmommyasmr
Felt like writing though! Even though I need to finish packing.......
I had this idea in May and I wrapped em up today.
Synopsis: You're going to your first pride out as yourself with your girlfriend. You help each other get ready and head to the bar to meet your friends, but of course, they're running late. You girlfriend has an idea on how to pass some time.
f4tm script - I am a sassy bratty bottom in this one [rare occurence]. We help each other get ready, I help you choose an outfit pretty quickly and you choose mine. You get me a necklace and I say 'thank you daddy' but that's the only 'daddy' i have scripted besides saying you look so daddy when you get dressed. The rest is ~ Pet names: Papi/papito, baby, 'motherfucker,' 'you're a fucking dick,' and 'fucking asshole' (bratting at you lmao), babe, and a teasing 'good boy' that I get punished for. Sex terms used - I'm getting finger fucked and ate out so. That's what we currently have. Open to suggestions.
f4tf - I am a playful, teasing dom in this one. I help you get ready after you second guess you outfit, giving you some dresses to choose from and doing your makeup and hair. Mentions of 'pretty legs.' Pet names - mamita, baby, sweetheart, darlin, princess, good girl, needy slut, my good slut. Sex terms used - fingering yourself, 'down there,' 'inside you,' tits/tit sucking, 'between your legs,' oral scene with noises left to imagination, tasting you. There's mentions of the potential of the listener coming, but no explicit mention of the listener coming. Also no speaker orgasm scripted. Thinking of adding some scissoring/pussy rubbing on the listener later but idk.
Thinking about writing a script where I'm a top for the f4tm script, and one where I'm a bottom for an f4tf script. But these were just the first writes. I draw from personal experiences so this was what naturally came out first. Open 2 feedback. If you see any typos let me know, I copied and pasted back and forth a bit as I'd get an idea for the other script while writing the other one.
Comments
Lilith
I like the 4tf script as is, the makeup and picking out clothes scene is fun, I like the amount of detail added, and the reference to Syd is neat too. With the Patreon exclusive nsfw scene while I'm personally not a fan of recieving oral in audios I think it's good as is, maybe adding some lines about playing with or touching the listeners nipples and some kissing before the speaker starts sucking on them to build things up a bit more slowly. Not a fan of the scissoring personally and I think the scene works well without it too.
TGC
The F4TF script is really hot 😳 I'd pass on adding scissoring/pussy rubbing... seems pretty awkward to do in the back seat of a car. Wearing a long dress to show off my legs doesn't make much sense to me... but maybe that's just because I really like skirts that barely cover my ass 😅
