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Arc | Chapter. 165: Home 

🕑 Added 2024-10-25 15:59:07 +0000 UTC

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Barneyzs

Will you start up Sybil again or are you dropping it?

grapefanta

It was the perfect time for Arc to finally release her emotions after her earlier realization of where she wanted to be and why.

Jonathan Wint

I liked it and I like the fact that she had a human aspect to her Don't get me wrong I love characters like Amber (Yes she's a psychopath a nice one but a psychopath. By the way being a psychopath literally means not that you're a bad person but you don't have the full spectrum of normal human emotions, I mean how do you understand other people's fears when you yourself have no sense of fear. Ruins your ability to have empathy. Like explaining color to someone that's blind)and your other stories but having Ark be human is a nice change of pace. She understands what it is to be lonely and broken because she has been lonely and broken. She's the most human human character you write about. Amber on the other hand reminds me a lot of my mother. My mother was a really good woman She went to work at soup kitchens She helped people whenever she could and she really wanted to be a good person but every once in awhile she'd slip up. She wasn't evil She just didn't understand normal human beings Yeah my mom was a psychopath. So understand I'm not using the word offensively I'm using the word literally It has nothing to do with being bloodthirsty It has to do with the inability to feel fear to feel loneliness or pain. To be missing emotions that would slow down a normal person. It must be a wonderful existence to be a psychopath. Some can actually feel guilt and other emotions like that but they don't really function the way the function for most people. Most of your characters are truly superhuman emotionally and that's fine There are people like that in the real world like my mom. But just so everyone understands the medical definition of that is psychopath. Arc is human She can't just wander off and train for 2 years and not mind if horrible unspeakable things happen to her and say yeah no biggie it was the past. That quite literally was my mom That is Amber. What people don't understand Is psychopaths don't just make the best villains They make the best heroes. I love Amber Don't change a single psychopathic impulse she has but at the same time it's lovely to have a real human girl reacting to having her leg cut off and months of isolation in a real human manner. In real life Theodore Roosevelt was considered one of the most wonderful people to ever lived He also got shot in the speech and continue to do the speech for another hour and a half He also tracked down two men who robbed him 400 miles through the wilderness and dragged them back to the police. Yeah he was clearly a heroic man and he was clearly missing a few cards from his deck He was a psychopath just one with a deep ingrained sense of right and wrong and honor. The truth is they make the very best of us and the very very worst of us. But they're not really one of us. Amber is a super functioning human being and she's a perfect example of a psychopath. But Ark is one of us a better example of a human being.

Vincto

It was indeed a very nice and warning read! I loved malz, arc and celyon reunion. Really heart warning. I didn't get why you said this chapter was unexpected tho. Anyway very good chap!


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