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Share and Share Alike - Page 9 [Redux]
🕑 Added 2016-05-13 19:19:18 +0000 UTC So, I normally don't do this, but I actually went back and reworked a couple panels on this page. I got to thinking about how Puzzle gets mad here (she'll get mad later too), but I figured that maybe she's not angry yet - she'd likely be more wistful than irritated.I had a subplot in mind for this comic that I was hinting at with this page, but I thought it over and figured it might derail the focus of the comic. Plus, drama is better served for the webcomic.
So, this page will replace the original. I'll include both in the rewards pack, but this will be the new default page.
Highres, WIP files and PSDs will be available as part of this month's patreon rewards, depending on your reward tier!
![Share and Share Alike - Page 9 [Redux]](https://img5.leaqio.com/storage/5/yl/yd/9e04c0-019e87f0-5243-72ca-aac7-c36e2b01c33d.jpg)
![Share and Share Alike - Page 9 [Redux]](https://img10.leaqio.com/storage/5/pl/aj/9e04c0-019e87f0-5262-7bb0-a0b8-629c7180f27d.jpg)
Comments
Kadath
lol!
Kadath
I'll include both with the month's rewards, but hopefully the next page will fill the green-eyed Puzzle need ;3
Kadath
Feisty Puzzle!
Kadath
I could add her door behind her in the 5th panel. Originally I had it in there, but deleted it, but I probably could've left it back in.
kazy
A tiny nitpick but the composition on this is a bit confusing, you can't really tell at first which door is which, as the staging of the doors in relation to one another isn't shown until the last frame. Edit: I think it's the fact that you can't tell which door she's in front of, so the sign sort of comes out of nowhere so it's not obvious it's her door that she is slamming.
Xaq
Glad to see she's not angry anymore (at least until they start making too much noise for her to work, I'm guessing), but still... :(
Patrick B
oh no....not sad Puzzle
MaxxDoutt
Yeah, this one seems a little more natural, especially for Puz's character. lol
RaptorC
I know why you did it but personaly I liked the previous one, seeing Puzzle getting a little green eyed
Ryagon
Instant sympathy. :c I wanna hug her now. Without ulterior motives, of course. >.>
Alex_the_Mad
Aww...I rather feel bad for Puzzle. Send hugs!!!
Stoker Bramwell
I think I like this better. Poor Puz.
