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Quaranteam - Hebridean Hame Ch.12

🕑 Added 2025-05-04 20:49:50 +0000 UTC

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James MacMillan

If I were to guess, I'd say in the next two weeks. I'm not too far off an initial draft, but my writing time has to fit around my other commitments... Sorry!

Luke

Any update on when your looking at the next chapter being released?

Tammy Hoffman

Oh don't leave me hanging like this

Kvothe228

Absolutely amazing, can't wait for the next one! 😍

Erik Hamsher

I find myself very intrigued for the next entry. Excellent work!

James MacMillan

Body: "Oh, I don't do that " Vaccine: "Hold my beer."

Christopher.g

So, at half-time, the score is Vaccine 1, Anorgasmia 0…. Looking forward to the 2nd half 😀

James MacMillan

Ah, thanks for spotting that. Grammarly changes without me reviewing them properly.

Christopher.g

Great stuff as always 😀. This sentence looks as if it needs a bit of tweaking (?): “There, Callum received extended hugs and kisses from Sarah and Alison, reminding them both about Karl’s medication warning to warn Alison about setting off to the Lodge before the fog cleared. “. Especially “warning to warn”

James MacMillan

A fictionalised version of it, but good detective work!

adhosbus1

Great chapter you might want to put the date for the flash back in bold. Just a thought.

John Bluck

Wow. I echo all the above

raptor8525

All that flashback with Catherine only for the chapter to end like that! Please tell us chapter 13 will be soon! P.S. I liked the additional geographic detail in the flashback, is the island supposed to be Eilean Shona?

Tumakhunter

Right?

Dave

I’m already having trouble waiting for the next chapter, and it’s been less than three minutes. I’ve been fully immersed in the entire Quaranteam universe since the very first appearance on Literotica and this has become my favorite of all the paths explored by the entire writing team. Your patience and willingness to fully develop your characters results in a much more gratifying payoff when the time is right. There are times when I’ve had to pause when reading other stories and remind myself who the characters are. No such problems here. Now stop reading this and get busy on the next chapter, please! Oh, and most importantly……thanks!

Fumtu

Damn! I'm thinking right now that hopefully she just bit her tongue, but it's good that there's assistance nearby, since it's actually possible for her to drown in her own blood, something that can be avoided with some attention. Definitely a surprise! I think I like getting the flashback, BTW, and (as appears to be pretty common) this chapter ends on a bigger cliffhanger than it had going into it. I'm going to have some trouble waiting for the next one.