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Hebridean Hame Ch 14 (very early WiP)

🕑 Added 2025-08-06 21:14:04 +0000 UTC

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Somerset_boy

Thank you very much for sharing your draft. I always enjoy every one of your new instalments. At first, I thought there was some ambiguity about who had the headache, but it was both Catherine and Callum. I like the fact that there are variations on how the vaccine affects different teams. And if this team has a headache-inducing separation anxiety then that's the way the story's going.

Christopher.g

Enjoying your work as always! Thank you. So much better written than most content here! Ido wonder, however, where you’re going with the separation headaches. If this becomes too much of a feature and constraint on Calum & team then the likely expedition to Glasgow (for Sarah’s parents probate process etc) is going to be a difficult or even impossible task and leave you with a tough job to write your way around it and risks a dead end.


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