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The Training of Jeff Stintum, Chapter 31 (Full)

🕑 Added 2019-09-21 21:53:17 +0000 UTC

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Joyce Julep

Thanks for the comment, Domingo! Glad you're enjoying the story. Some chapters are just gonna be longer than others. When I first started this story last year, the chapters quickly became really, really long. But I think, at least for this part of the story, shorter chapters are better. But I think the next one will be a little longer :)

Joyce Julep

I don't wanna spoil anything! ;)

jsm109

How small is he gonna get?

NavK

Fantastic chapter. The end line was amazing "Sarah was marking him as her own. Permanently". Even though I like where I like where this is going, I can't help it but feel a litte sorry for Jeff. Once a proud deluded guy turned into mere shell of himself and a total slave. I was also intruiged where Savannah says "It’s just been too long, Sarah" to which Sarah replies "I know. But I had to take a little time, you know…after what happened last time.” There definitely history there and seems they've been doing this a while, which is even scary and doesn't board well for Jeff's future. Looking forward where this leads to. And finally I can't hep but notice the chapters are getting shorter and shorter. When you started each chapter was about 14-15 (in the font size i use) and lately it was about 11 but this now comes only to 9 pages.


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