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Ghost in the City: Early chapter 233

🕑 Added 2025-07-26 20:22:44 +0000 UTC

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carebear90

The romance doesn't go anywhere because the characters are underage, and the website this story was first released on (spacebattles) is very strict about 'sexualisation of minors'. Welcome to the club! I can only recommend looking into Seras' other stories if you liked GitC. The main character is almost always the same personality-wise. Just inserted into different worlds/scenarios with different 'powers'. Makes for lighthearted fun power fantasies that don't take themselves too seriously. :)

EmmericH.

New here ! Great job on this fanfic, been looking for cyberpunk ones recently and I'm glad to have found this one, Motoko is a bit of a Mary Sue but it's non issue, the plot is great, the characters are fun, when shit get serious it grips your guts, there's everything that you would like in a good story, I may have a bit of an issue with the pacing where it seems fast but a the same time not even a year has past and I'm really confused about the romance between characters where it's more anime like, where it doesn't seems to go anywhere. One thing I'm glad for is to not having explicit sexual stuff despite being a cyberpunk story, it always feel off-putting when put on paper with words for me, so thanks for that. And also I love the inclusion of canon characters without making them too relevant for the story and more like side characters having their own thing, just found it weird when Motoko texted V but we got no follow up on that since then, maybe it will be relevant later, but it's been bugging me🤣

Sanguinati

Never thought to do this before but heres my suggestions for songs. Main show, Sixx a.m: life is beautiful. Rob zombie: feel so numb. Welshly arms: legendary. Highly suspect: my name is human. David kushner: daylight. After party, jorgen Dahl moe's cover of dancing in the dark. Passenger: let her go. One republic: i lived.

carebear90

The original by Simon and Garfunkel is from the 60s... Shouldn't that mean it already exists in Cyberpunk world? I'm not really familiar with the lore.

Thrent

Just had a thought : Sound of silence would make a lot of sense in that kind of post-concert after party setting. "And the people bowed and prayed To the neon god they made And the sign flashed out its warning In the words that it was forming And the sign said, "The words of the prophets are written on the subway walls In tenement halls" And whispered in the sounds of silence"

David C.

Took me a week to read. this story is great!

carebear90

"Alice had gotten cold feet about another new song, but that was fine." Stuff like this makes this story feel so relateable. :D 'This will be our THING. A new song every gig.' ... 'Meh too difficult. Let's not, after all.' Motoko: 'Sigh... I'll just do it myself.'

Nadrojian

Becca needs to show up at one of the shows and get given a carnage it would be hilarious!

imnotarobot

Good stuff! I think a lot of Ozzy Osbourne and Black Sabbath songs (RIP) would fit really well in a cyberpunk setting.


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