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🕑 Added 2021-10-30 04:53:44 +0000 UTC

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Kennit Kenway

Yep.

Kennit Kenway

I meant October, yes.

sri kalyan mulukutla

Author u mean october right?

Mario Morales

That's what I was wondering cause we're in October.

P enyuk

Last chapter for November?

Zarik0

Ah off course here we go again in a big bag of trouble :) he can never rest, stop torturing him author for god sake xD Love chapter like this ;) The starting of this chapter feel strange, we get Sylver thinking and be distracted of his entourage and it let us know about "all" his plan for trying to fuck the system, but they are no fucking way he dont get his brain fryed by the system at some point with how its written how he think and though about it here (we have nowhere mention of wave of system fuzing or headache for this thinking he do here) I think you need to add a line or two somehwere here (at the start?) to say this is the resumed plan and the gathering of piece of his thinking he have done after he have juggling and playing hide and catch in his though with the system monitoring Dodging most of fuzzing wave and getting a big headache for it because of every little misstep he sure do and need to backpedal everytime when he need to think/though about it without thinking and though about it So you can writte his thinking and some of his plan about it like you do here (without every line needed to add he get stopped in his though, guess its really adding work, need to pay attention to it and its hard to write his view and plan (thinking and though) about the system with the setting you created, constant interruption to need to stay consistant about it Hope what i mean is understandable, im so bad at writting ;P morever in another language, cant seem to get the good, clear and short words needed for my though to be concise and clear without adding line and line of word in the end, sry about that and the headache to read MTL quality i create in the end

sri kalyan mulukutla

The very expression, getting caught with your pants down.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Rotary

Great stuff as always! I’m happy Sylver didn’t end up wrist deep in a grandma like I had worried


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