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Chapter 26: The Plan to Kill Capitalism

🕑 Added 2025-01-28 06:47:29 +0000 UTC

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Dylan Alexander

As with anything, there are both pros and cons. While I’m not a big fan of capitalism myself, I can also admit that it has made the world better in some ways while also making it worse in others. Greed being a high point.

Nemorosus

Comments like these make it hard to not just want to spoil stuff! All I'll say is that I'm enjoying writing this, and I'm pretty happy with the direction I'm taking things.

Armo

I’m really enjoying the story so far. You are really leaning into the serious/comedic contrast - I love it! Some thoughts on the story so far: Sometimes I can’t separate where Willem is just explaining his honest experience from his past life and where he is covering for missing memories. He is normally honest, so (for example) for the killing thing, I’m going to assume that he was in the Army at some point. Maybe he even made it somewhere in the hierarchy. But then he lost a son, and everything changed. Poor guy. But at the same time, if he was in the army, there might yet be an angle for warfare in the story, and I’m always excited for that side of politics. I really hope that Willem is pulled into at least learning/relearning self-defense. Though Willem is old, and set in his ways, I think a second lease on life comes with new opportunities to learn and change his mind, both about things he is passionate about and things he might not care for as much. And old Willem seems to have enjoyed some things, like riding. So maybe new Willem might, too. Moreover, relearning fighting would also be a great tool for repairing the Burgh family - or forging a new one. I wonder if any of Willem’s brothers would appreciate having an actually decent brother, and would like to spend more time with him. Maybe sparring would be an excuse to do so.

Michael Vonica

I won't disagree with you, but maybe this story in particular isn't the best place to air those grievances. The capitalism at play in this story doesn't really compare to what we have going on in the modern day. Edit: I'd also add on, for Nemo, that while you aren't wrong, the situation isn't so simple. While some people get easy access to vaccines for diseases that regularly killed millions of children, other people get the political stability of their countries torn to shreds so that fruit corporations don't need to pay for their land. The benefits of capitalism are undeniable, but they also aren't equal for everyone. Some people have very real grievances with it. I'd probably be near the bottom of that list, though. I will say again that I don't think this is the place for that sort of discussion. It really is only tangentially related to the story.

Nemorosus

Yeah, we should go back to the good old days when we had kings and queens and the average person was a serf that was considered tied to the land, and could be sold alongside it. I'm not denying things could be better because they always can be, but compare the average person now to the average person two hundred years ago and it's quite the stark difference. Being able to protest the powers that be without being violently oppressed is a relatively new invention.

mhaj58

I might be in the minority, but I personally detest capitalism. Tech monopolies are ruining everything and I wish they were dead


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