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Chapter 49: That Place Where All Roads Lead

🕑 Added 2025-03-03 06:41:20 +0000 UTC

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Matteo

I'm a bit surprised that the whole Vivienne learning about Willem(s) happened off-scene. It's interesting; I think that if I read this chapter as a start of a book two weeks/months after finishing book 1 it would work (slightly) better. In web novel format though it feels a bit like an unexpected time jump where we jumped over a significant event. Even if we didn't see her initial interaction with Willem post-learning the truth maybe an epilogue of her finding out might be worthwhile and racket up the tension for the second volume.

WarStrider72

Willem to Arend: How would you like to make a deal with the devil?

EsZeus

Nice :)

Reviewman

Don't forget the in-universe history Suzanne recounted: "It seemed there was yet another twin-souled individual in the world. The last one had helped establish a thousand-year dynasty. What would the Willems do?" The Ravenveld dynasty started with a twin-souled individual. Who knows if that would (dis)qualify him? If it gets known by the king, he'll probably offer a choice, marriage or be assasinated. As a twin-souled individual running around could be too risky if he's not in your camp.

Michael Vonica

So many problems with the princess situation. It being an arranged marriage competition, Willem being two people, one of those two people being 80, and both of them being assholes. I think it would also be pretty complicated for old Willem. He has very deep romantic hangups, and a 20 year old would probably be too inexperienced for him. As for Willem Van Burgh, I imagine being king would be very appealing for him. But he's been in this situation before. He thought he wanted to be Baron. But Jansen showed him a better way. I imagine Van Burgh learned from that. I wouldn't be surprised if he gives Jansen the option to ignore the competition, but only if Jansen thinks he can make a life for them just as good as being king.

Reviewman

Goodbye Gent, we will all miss you !!

John Anastacio

Very nice chapter, thank you.


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